【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
- G' B- {1 |- l+ ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 I% J: o& S, N3 N% g6 @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 }" w0 c! ~) a$ t" K! J2 s1 c* ^5 |The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
$ d$ y: i/ t- k" l0 }$ ZSeeing the sky content with its love
. p; i0 V6 h4 h$ P3 h9 V& SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
5 r/ N% _; t3 n) LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
1 t( m& O1 g5 I7 ?Nothing can compare to my love
+ o  F$ |& s8 SCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  o, b, e' O8 d1 n- v, dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
  r- D0 d4 w* ^! J3 H2 [1 MI’m still filled with fear
/ H. j3 u( \# V0 S3 x/ S( C5 u1 IYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" [! u8 T! w+ jI regret not dying
) W/ j: Y5 F9 m% R3 \$ mI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ s% u! U! P( s; nWith such a tongue as yours,
) f% Y+ ^9 k; {0 OYour speech can’t even keep up with it
# C' y7 p) F, GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 h# o: W, X9 G8 K. v6 O4 ^5 i8 ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

+ e* t; v$ x4 `3 ]% h" h& O( `<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
( ^3 C$ T( m7 o& q5 z$ `6 B* Q1 f<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 [+ M, u2 e; E8 @# |5 ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& K+ v% f2 G& C5 E) I: o" @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
" }' O8 b& `+ k9 N) v  L<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 ~8 n5 O2 U. Z8 Z/ I<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
/ d+ b5 G% y1 M6 U<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 S' p/ F9 _; X# @<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
& E- E4 P+ U+ v" w! m. U" U, k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 H2 ]6 _) F* g! t9 g9 n' s; `<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
- ]# ~- e6 q! b& S, n4 p<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 h/ p6 n0 E: P<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ S" _0 O5 }( C, i8 q* B. ?<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* x( t! Y, l/ m1 o5 n% r9 O<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: J+ X: ~! L5 V" _% {* R5 v4 x: @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' i% J, l5 I- U+ Y2 U# S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ J: [3 u: l8 L7 V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  J/ Y; m$ F% o! c0 j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' v1 y, O" B# C" u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 T. }8 i* X6 s/ t# L# o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
0 T5 m+ }, p8 R+ s1 }$ c5 W. A: z<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: W! C1 d1 x' A. i+ C" r; H<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ I' D. c: B2 v9 [% r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
3 n1 y( s+ _5 ~# T4 G2 [0 _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 Y5 j7 r) V) m# `8 K, s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
0 o, n; n& _* @& g7 O8 y7 [" i, o<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  L# `: ~9 R+ R# C  s# n<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* @0 B1 ?, S  T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 a9 ]" O5 o( z) Z# s7 l0 n5 B- ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 L% \1 e- N- U2 s; M9 n1 r) c/ N- u<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

6 ?  w1 o1 M: f$ V/ ?8 D' \我请你剖开它
6 o3 F1 h0 G. i$ ^
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>